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hopelesskyle

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Sep. 20th, 2005|09:35 am

dead_kyle
You have something really awesome there. Add something in there to make the audience feel somthing toward him. Either feeling sorry that he's so numb, or the opposite. i knwo it's not finished, but think on that.
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