| Still trying to get to part 2 |
[Sep. 13th, 2005|03:12 am] |
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You have something really awesome there. Add something in there to make the audience feel somthing toward him. Either feeling sorry that he's so numb, or the opposite. i knwo it's not finished, but think on that. | |
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